4 thoughts on “Spinetinglers' Book of the Year Award Winner Gives Readers 10 Free Chapters to Promote Book

  1. Dear Karen,

    Thank You for your comments. Have you ever read the first two Harry Potter books? I think I did do “Show don’t tell”.

    Thank you and good luck with your writing.

    W.W.

  2. Excellent story and well written. My only suggestion would be the golden rule of fiction -Show Don’t Tell-. It is my opinion that action should be the beginning and not setting up the characters and location. This can be done while the story progresses. I feel a writer must grab the reader in the first chapter and make them want to keep reading.

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