Comments on: IntraBeing http://publicliterature.org/2008/10/22/intrabeing/ Only the finest in online classics Fri, 11 May 2012 01:26:22 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Vijay Kumar http://publicliterature.org/2008/10/22/intrabeing/#comment-350 Vijay Kumar Mon, 10 Nov 2008 16:41:46 +0000 http://publicliterature.org/?p=443#comment-350 'If only we can cross this cosmic threshold,'.. Flowing poem of deep, intense imagery and emotions.Wonderful,Gianetta. ‘If only we can cross this cosmic threshold,’..
Flowing poem of deep, intense imagery and emotions.Wonderful,Gianetta.

]]> By: Wyn Preston http://publicliterature.org/2008/10/22/intrabeing/#comment-349 Wyn Preston Tue, 28 Oct 2008 23:16:25 +0000 http://publicliterature.org/?p=443#comment-349 'Driven from withi' is the perfect way to finish that. Thanks. ‘Driven from withi’ is the perfect way to finish that. Thanks.

]]> By: gianetta_ellis http://publicliterature.org/2008/10/22/intrabeing/#comment-348 gianetta_ellis Fri, 24 Oct 2008 13:04:01 +0000 http://publicliterature.org/?p=443#comment-348 Thank you to Richard, and to everyone, who honours me with their thoughts; I appreciate every word, every perspective. Gianetta Thank you to Richard, and to everyone, who honours me with their thoughts; I appreciate every word, every perspective.
Gianetta

]]> By: richard_cederberg http://publicliterature.org/2008/10/22/intrabeing/#comment-347 richard_cederberg Thu, 23 Oct 2008 20:46:14 +0000 http://publicliterature.org/?p=443#comment-347 Delightfully multi-faceted imagery you have spread through this poetess. "fragrant racemes" Considering this elongate cluster of flowers opens from the bottom up ... An extended metaphor perhaps? "I'll meet you in the Renaissance;" It would be a revival of learning and culture indeed ... "I'll meet you post-Armageddon" This post war battlefield (Earth) will be quite messy and in need of overwhelming vision to re-build and sustain through the prophesied millennial period ... Rising above the challenges with hope and the desire to shed abroad life and light, your write is permeated with love and insight and effectively reflects the visionary that you are blessed to be. Delightfully multi-faceted imagery you have spread through this poetess.

“fragrant racemes”
Considering this elongate cluster of flowers opens from the bottom up …

An extended metaphor perhaps?

“I’ll meet you in the Renaissance;”
It would be a revival of learning and culture indeed …

“I’ll meet you post-Armageddon”
This post war battlefield (Earth) will be quite messy and in need of overwhelming vision to re-build and sustain through the prophesied millennial period …

Rising above the challenges with hope and the desire to shed abroad life and light, your write is permeated with love and insight and effectively reflects the visionary that you are blessed to be.

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