Dear Ms. Spider….
I cannot come and dine tonight
You see, I don’t have very good sight
Along with that I cannot choose
Which shoes and clothes that I should use
That’s not all, I have a cold
And all my bones feel cranky and old
So you see it’s not the day
Why don’t we dine on Saturday?
Sincerely replied,
The Fly
Wah, you’re great, Milou…!
Thanks all for your great comments:-)
…japp I will keep everything on my blog http://poetry4kids.wordpress.com
Have a great day,
Milou
Excellent, keep everything you write, never throw anything away, by the time you get to 21 you will have a volume of smiles to give to the world.
Funny and smart. I enjoy reading your poems. Keep it coming, Milou!
Good luck, I really love children literature. Keep up the good work.